1. For Ubuntu-like systems, I removed the line about clicking to start the
dashboard because it was unnecessarily specific to Unity. There are plenty of
Ubuntu flavors and derivative distros which use other desktops.
2. For the systemd sections about setting up user and system services, I thought
it would make more sense to explain the difference between user- and
system-level services *before* telling the user how to enable them.
3. Pairs of systemd commands where you would run one or the other depending on
how you set up the service should be labeled as such. Otherwise, inexperienced
readers might think you should run the commands in succession.
4. umask is a tricky subject for people who haven't used it before, so I thought
linking to an article that explains it would be helpful.
Gal Szkolnik
Stefan-Code
terrycloth
Stefan Tatschner
Jakob Borg
theincogtion
Stefan Tatschner
Alex Chan